Diana-gabaldon Quotes
Conflict and character are the heart of good fiction, and good mystery has both of those in spades.
But it wouldn’t have half the power of a story in which Jamie and Claire truly conquer real evil and...
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You don’t need to know the purpose as you write, but when you read over something you’ve written, yo...
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Dialogue doesn’t take place in a vacuum. Dialogue is contradictory, in that it can either speed up o...
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You want to anchor the scene with physical details, but by and large it’s better to use sensual deta...
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Okay. This has to be a credible threat. Ergo, we have to have seen (and heard about) the real damage...
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Pointing out the emotion in a scene is like laughing at your own jokes.

Watch a good movie sometime without reference to what’s happening but only with attention to how it ...
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Don’t let characters talk pointlessly—they only talk if there’s something to say.

As a rule of thumb, four consecutive lines of dialogue is about as much as you want to have without ...
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Don’t go overboard in avoiding “said.” Basically, “said” is the default for dialogue, and a good thi...
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To some extent, emotions are universal and can be treated that way; no matter what the participants’...
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If you can’t look a line of dialogue in the face and say exactly why it’s there—take it out or chang...
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Just as an effective advertisement or page layout includes a lot of white space, a powerful scene re...
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Almost everybody understands that you have to have something at stake for a story to be good.

Good sex scene is about the exchange of emotions, not bodily fluids

Men have external genitalia, while women have internal genitalia. This simple difference makes a lot...
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For a different woman, a different relationship, a different situation, gentleness might have been t...
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One of the general patterns of good (i.e., striking and memorable) writing is the effect of repetiti...
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There’s a little trick called the Rule of Three: if you use any three of the five senses, it will ma...
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Jamie’s viewpoint is expressed almost entirely in metaphor: If she was broken, she would slash him w...
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If there’s true emotional content in a situation between characters, all you do is reveal it.

#Outlander QOTD Claire and Master Raymond.Snapped abruptly to a realization of how rudely I had been...
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Snapped abruptly to a realization of how rudely I had been staring, I blushed and said without think...
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It would ha' been a good deal easier, if ye'd only been a witch.
